Saturday, May 7, 2011

untitled (after Don McKay)

Sometimes a voice – have you heard this? –
wants not to be a voice any longer, wants something
whispering between the words, some
rumour of its former life.  Sometimes, even
in the midst of making sense or conversation, it will
hearken back to breath, or even farther,
to the wind, and recognise itself as troubled air, a flight path still
looking for its bird. -   Don McKay, from “Sometimes a voice (1)”

Today i broke a word.  Snapped it.
pestled it to powder.
Made a paper funnel then
poured it into my ear
and after that heard nothing

but

the slurring tinnitus
of radio silence.



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6 comments:

  1. Absolutely stunning poem.
    Sound... words.. snapping silence.

    x

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  2. the epigraph is so much longer than my bit.

    worries me a little... :)

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  3. Love it, and don't worry about length, you use the exact amount of words needed to pass on the message. I like poems that deal with the love / contempt relationship that we can have with words.

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  4. Applause from the dress circle

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  5. Oh wow. I heard the snap. Love this.

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  6. Snap. Crackle. Pop. You might even like some of mine... Enjoyed. Cheers.

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